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At least the maid outfit is cute

June 21st, 2011, 12:20 pm

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Reply Lord T Hawkeye, June 21st, 2011, 12:20 pm

How will our hero get out of this?

Bad news, there will not be a comic page next week. Had to divert funds to finishing a comish from Akashi I'd been putting off. The regularily scheduled comic will resume next month as typical.

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Reply swade wade, June 21st, 2011, 12:56 pm

Whoa... Uh....*Looks left and right and pulls out his camera.* So gonna take a picture of...*Remember Pen's army of ninjas.*...Worth it! *Takes a picture.*

Reply pensuka, June 21st, 2011, 1:19 pm

((for swade wade))

pensuka: what you think your doing

swade wade: uuhh nothing

*pensuka snatchs swade wade's camra and crushs it with his hand*

swade wade: hey that camra was expensive!!

*pensuka released a hige killer intent which swade wade fell on to the ground and wet himself*

pensuka: try anything like that agian and ill make you wish that you were tourtured by the most fear anime characters you can think of for 5 months straight!!

swade wade: ill be good

Reply pensuka, June 21st, 2011, 3:23 pm

insert super dragon soul theme and mystic gohan power up theme ((now for more fun))

nanaka: now what to do with my new servant

*before nanaka could thing of anything there was afew sounds of gun fire out side and then 1 of the walls made a small explosion which made a big hole in it which everyone looked at the hole which they heard*

???: finally found you nanaka ill say this once more release them and change her back

nanaka: *eyes wide* it cant be!!

*when the smoke cleared it showed pensuka in his third super level giving nanaka a glare that was 10000 times more cold then ice*

pensuka: do i have to beat some sense into you

element: dude i know you mad but you got tttoooo OH MY GOD!!

*element, pit,alex, ryu looked at megumi's outfit in shock while element gained a tiny blush which then pensuka looked at megumi and then back to nanaka*

ryu: dare we ask why shes wearing a maids uniform and a abit skimpy type on to be exact

nanaka: isnt obvious she is going to be my new servant when ever she likes it or not *did a small evil laugh*

pensuka: what did you say

nanaka: didnt you hear i said she will be my servant and ill make her do what ever i want even if it involes ruining her life!!!

*the tempreture suddenly dropped and and everyone saw pensuka clenched his fists and growled to what sounded like a wolf*

ryu: i think you just gone past the line of making him angry

*pensuka sets to a stances and focus more power*

pensuka: thats it the kid gloves are off!!!!!

*pensuka then did 2,000,000 handsigns at the speed of sound and stopped at a ram hand sign which he then began to glow from saphiare blue to emerald green*

nanaka: what the!!

ryu: could it be??

element: what??

ryu: back then he placed a special limit reduce jutsu he made back then which seals 70% of his power i though he removed that 4 months ago

pit: wait if your saying is true then his true power would be more then triple the amount it is now!!!

element: your joking!!

ryu: nope im not joking

pensuka: Ninja art divine limit reducer seal release!!!!

*which then they saw what looked like smoke coming out of his body for 25 seconds*

nanaka: i bet their bluffing

*pensuka powers up to full strength and then a huge earthquake apppered but abit stronger then the one he made before it felt like everything in 100,000,000 lightyears was trembeling by the amount of power pensuka was making and then a huge flash of light appered and pensuka stood calmly yet he looked different he had a emerald gren marks on his left arm and his hair was no long long it was same length as his second super level yet now it was ruby crimson and everyone was stunned of the intense amount of power*

element: unreal...

ryu: guess he finally awoken his true hidden power

pit: hidden power??

alex: yeah he always has a incredible amount of power laying dorment in him and he couldnt control it when ever it was out for short length of time he fogets what happens during then

pit: oohh like gohan from the dragonball z series

ryu: correct i bet the gods could feel surprised of this power


--------meanwhile in heaven-----

*kami ((or god but kami is same meaning just japanese version of calling him)) felt a intense amount of energy while he was sorting out some paperwork in heaven*

kami: what was that huge power best have a quick look

*kami opens a one way veiwing portal which when he saw he finally understood and closed the portal*

kami: looks like he finally awakened his power hehe i bet satan will think twice when he will plan to take over the mortal realm

--------meanwhile at hell------

*satan and the grim reaper was having a chat when they felt a intense amount of energy which made them feel a chill down their spine*

satan: you sensed that

grim reaper: indeed but what could of made such power

*satan pulled up his veiwing portal and when he and the grim reaper saw it satan's face when pale for first time in his life while the grim reaper gave a shocked look so sataned put away the veiwing portal*

satan: that isnt good

grim reaper: what you mean

satan: you know the mortal that gave me this * shows the grim reaper a scare on his right arm*

grim reaper: *nods* yes if i recall his name was pensuka for he and that ryu guy did surprise you abit there why??

satan: cause that was pensuka that gave that intense power

grim reaper: what!!!! a mortal getting to generate that much power but isnt that impossible!!!

satan: that guy always finds away to make it possible some how..


----back to pensuka and other----


nanaka: what you mean the gods get to sense it??

ryu: me and pensuka fought agianst satan back then and won also pensuka gave satan a scar on the right arm

*everyone besides ryu, alex and pensuka's eyes became wide as dinner plate*

element: you guys fought satan!!!

pit: and won along giving satan a scar!!!!

alex: i said the same thing when they told me that

megumi: if i may ask but what does this mean??

pensuka: allow me it means nanaka is facing a oppponent she cant win

nanaka: you mean...

ryu: *smirks* yep your screwed big time

nanaka: ooohhh crud

Reply Element840 (Guest), June 21st, 2011, 6:35 pm

Pardon me... (just throwin out an idea here, dont mind me much)

-in the room a small robot that looks like a small video camera with spider legs is in a corner unoticed-

-elsewhere in a hideout deep in the underground part of the city-

Element840: so that's whats she's up to....

Pit: what now?

Element840: i say we crash that party of her's....and besides...there's somethin i've been meaning to say to that father of hers...

Pit: but how will you get in?

Element840: dont you remember? they think im still part of their little mafia. getting in will be a cake-walk.

Pit: ok.....but are you sure your gonna survive if something happens? sure that armour of yours is bullet-proof, but im not sure about anything...heavy-duty, if you know what i mean

Element840: i hear ya, im bring some of the rest of my personal crew along

Pit: ah those guys, I'll go tell them about the "party"

Element840: good, oh and tell them to get dressed in formal wear, we'll need to be incognito for the first half of this operation

Pit: alright, ill get everything set -goes away-

Element840: this is gonna be good.....hhmm.......better be extra careful about this.....Pensuka might show up and since he still thinks im the enemy i might not get out of this one unscathed.....either way this aint gonna be easy...-turns to a whole wall of monitors each on every area of the city and some showing images of past events like the dance and whatnot- i dont know a lot about this world....but lets see what we can do....-i pull out a small white stone and fiddle with it in my hand-

Reply Alex Warlorn (Guest), June 22nd, 2011, 9:36 am

I guess she's too sadistic to want mental changes. I think our victim's bust got 'upgraded' I see.

I wonder where the rest of miss evil dolly's family and staff and friends are at the moment.

Reply daichiazure, June 23rd, 2011, 9:29 am

Hmmm... Hopefully she doesn't us a Mikuru beam....oh hang on is that another camera or a MISPLACED arrow [MSF High reference...]

Reply pensuka, June 23rd, 2011, 10:09 am

((continueing from my previous comment))

nanaka: i dont care how strong you are i will have my revenge

*nanaka attemps to attack pensuka but pensuka blocks and dodges all attacks as if they were moving at a snails pace*

pensuka: nanaka this battle is pointless release them and change her back and vow to never do anything like this agian and i may forgive you for what you done so far

element: dude you serious after what she done!!

pit: i think i get where this is going

element and alex: huh???

ryu: indeed see pensuka is planning to give a second chance to redeem her self from all thing she had done before

alex: oh i get it a chance to forgive for anything bad she done back then

element: oh but will she accept??

nanaka: the odds of that happening would be when i deside would be when *points to pit* that guy gets to be a werewolf!!!

element: wow guess she descibed that answer in detail abit

ryu: ill say

Reply Fetch (Guest), June 24th, 2011, 6:26 pm

If she obeys, she'll have time to think of a plan. If she disobeys, she could end up being just a decoration.

Reply Keldeo_Lover (Guest), June 25th, 2011, 7:22 am

FRENCH MAID?!? Oh... I thought pensuka was a girl... oh well... if I meet him again I'll TG him... ' w'
By the way who do you mean Fetch? Megumi or Nanaka?

Reply Fetch (Guest), June 25th, 2011, 10:03 am

Megumi of course. If she doesn't do what Nanaka says, Nanaka might just turn her into something immobile.

Reply Keldeo_Lover (Guest), June 27th, 2011, 10:58 am

(to Fetch) Oh... OK got it!

Reply Brian6330 (Guest), July 3rd, 2011, 12:56 am

:D Love the comic! Hope to see the next part on monday.

Let's see if she obeys or not.

Reply Keldeo_Lover (Guest), July 5th, 2011, 1:11 pm

GRR... Brian6330!!! FOR THE LAST TIME Brian6330 WHO DO YOU MEAN??? MEGUMI OR NANAKA??? l:-( (By the way, Lord T Hawkeye said there's no comic next week... well IF there's one)AND FOR THE LOVE OF KELDEO, WIPE THAT SMILE OFF YOUR FACE!!! IT IS SO NOT FUNNY!

Reply Keldeo_Lover (Guest), July 5th, 2011, 2:00 pm

What would had happened if I was here... ???: "Missy here will make a nice servant for the evening"?

Nanaka: What the-

(A wall breaks and I stand with a mysterious creature)

Nanaka: Who the hell are you?

Me: I will never reveal my real name! Keldeo, Secret Sword on Daisuke let's go!

Keldeo: Keldeeeo! (Used Secret Sword that cuts ribbons and free Daisuke)

Daisuke: Geez! Thanks a lot... whoever you are.

Nanaka: Grrr... You'll pay for this, pony! (Get ready to use Dolly Perfume Transformer)

Me: I don't think so. Keldeo, use Protect!

Keldeo: Kellldeo! (A green sheild appears out of nowhere and protects Keldeo, me, Daisuke and Megumi)

Me: Come on, let's get out of here!

Megumi and Daisuke: Ok.

(Everyone execpt Nanaka runs away)

Nanaka: COME BACK HERE!

-----At the park-----

Me: (sigh) At last!

Megumi: Oh! Here's my sister and ribbon!

Daisuke: Anyway WHO are you?

Me: The name's White.

Megumi: White, thank you for rescuing us.

Daisuke: Yeah what Megumi said.

Me: 'K see you soon if you need anything!

Keldeo: Keldeo!

(Both me and Keldeo run into a portal I just called out and we disappear)

Daisuke: Isn't she a Pokémon Trainer?

Megumi: Who knows? Come on let's go home. Oh hold on! I haven't returned Natsume imto her real self! (Puts her ribbon on the dolly and the doll instantly becomes human)

Natsume: Sis you did it! Um... sis... you look wierd...

Megumi: (Blushes) I'll tell you more when we get home. Come on.

(Everyone leaves with happy faces)

Reply Chuck_Tha_Cheat (Guest), July 5th, 2011, 3:19 pm

Keldeo, y u mad?

Reply Keldeo_Lover (Guest), July 12th, 2011, 12:42 pm

I'm just annoyed you know

Reply James Birdsong, June 14th, 2013, 10:06 am

Good maid outfit

Reply magnar1234, March 22nd, 2014, 8:55 am

ummm... why does that look like a... oh god

Reply Agent B (Guest), May 21st, 2014, 10:16 am

Dolly... IN THE MAID BIZ??? @Lord T Hawkeye: WHAT THE FACK IS GOING ON HERE? Oh... (to megumi): I'd like some iced tea, W/ out the ice.
Megumi: I'D LOVE TO. SERVITUDE FEELS SO GOOD.
Agent B(to nanaka): What did you DO to her?
Nanaka: Let's just say... She's ADJUSTED to her new role.
Agent B: You'll NEVER, EVER get away with this!
Nanaka: *Seductive giggle* I already have, Sweetie.
Agent B: Time to rock the place... TO THE BEARD-MOBILE!
Nanaka: "Beard-mobile"? Really?
Agent B: My version of the batmobile.

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