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Nanaka, new and improved

May 21st, 2011, 7:22 am

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Reply Lord T Hawkeye, May 21st, 2011, 7:22 am

And there you we go folks. You asked for it, you pleaded for it, you downright threatened me for it. Doll Nanaka for you. Hope it was worth the wait. ^^

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User's Comments:

Reply YRPOtaku169 (Guest), May 21st, 2011, 8:43 am

O_O ...Whoa...

Reply swade wade, May 21st, 2011, 9:30 am

Ooooh snap. O.O I have just met my dream evil girl, and her name is Nanaka. *Looks left and right, and takes a picture* Yeeeaaaaah she is freaking hot!

Reply pensuka, May 21st, 2011, 11:05 am

battle stations!! pensuka: flames of war ignite!!

ryu: thats the signal go!!!

*ninja squad 1 and 2 chardged in along with afew squads of robots, ryu and alex firing afew shots at nanaka*

nanaka: what the a ambush!!

megumi: what the

alex: relax we came to save you and your boyfreind

*both megumi and daisuke blushed*

nanaka: so you knew??

pensuka: you can thank me for that

*nanaka glares at pensuka*

ryu: yeah you have to beat us to get to them

pensuka: squad 3 and 4 come out and get those two to safety we will hold her off

*ninja squad 3 and 4 appered*

ninja squad leader 3: follow up

megumi: ok

daisuke: right

*pensuka looks at nanaka*

pensuka: now

*pensuka and the ninja squad 1 and 2 did a hand sign*

ninja squad 1, ninja squad 2 and pensuka: shadow clone jutsu

*and thier numbers grew by 200 all together*

ryu: you did ninja training too??

pensuka: yep

ryu: cool

pensuka:now lets go wild!!!!

Reply Element840 (Guest), May 21st, 2011, 12:55 pm

Pardon me... -a few Minutes later....-

Ninja 1: what n the world.....-faints-

Ninja 2: so much power...from one girl....-faints-

Nanaka: ha! i was scared at first, but it looks like your little gang just couldnt handle the new me!

Pensuka: you may have gotten them...but you wont get me!

-a battle starts....both Pensuka and nanaka are evenly matched-

Pensuka:-pants odd yet surprisingly strong power....but i haven't even started yet!

Nanaka: oh cry me a river! -her hand becomes an iron fist that is heading right at pensuka, but an arrow of light separates them-

Pensuka: what the....?

-me and pit appear, behind us are a couple of soldiers in various outfits, carrying guns, swords, and all sorts of weapons:

Pit: just because you told us to back off....

Element840: doesn't mean we're gonna!

Pensuka: get out of here now before i send you out in a body cast!!

Element840: im not gonna listen to you

Pensuka: what did you say?!

Element840: so your a little stronger than me when im not fully armed, big wup

Pensuka: fully armed?

Element840: when i got my special suit on, i can rival you big time baby

Pit:-face palm- dont get too cocky....-hits element on the head-

Element840: OW! okay, okay! but still, i am NOT as weak as you think.

Pensuka: can prove that AFTER this idiot is beaten...she's gonna pay for beating my men! -powers up-

Ryu: don't forget us!

Alex: yeah don't count us out yet!

Pensuka: you guys....-wipes away small tears and grins- alright you witch....PREPARE YOURSELF!

Nanaka: hehe....interesting....but you cant even begin to imagine what your up against!

Reply pensuka, May 21st, 2011, 3:07 pm

time to kick it up a notch (to element this will spook you)

pensuka:time out


element: why were in middle of a battle

*pensuka removes 4 special training weight and tossed them and when they hit the ground that made a 15 mile deep crater and a high tech arm band came off by its self*

pensuka: there get those weights off

element: dam how much did they weight!?!

pensuka: 900,000,750 tons a peice

everyone except pensuka: what over 900,000,000 tons a peice thats insane!!!!

alex: and that arm band isnt that a x-57 power reducer i hear they supress 90% of a persones power only those with insane amount power can handle wearing them

pensuka: correct looks like not only the time limit of how long it stays on finished but it ran out of power as well

element: meaning

pensuka: meaning i can ascend past my super level

*pensuka goes to his super level and begins powering up*

nanaka: nice try but i know your bluffing HAHAHAHA!!

*pensuka's grew greater and greater til then he emited a powerful shock wave and a created a huge pillar of light which it blinded everyone for abit and when the light died down pensuka stood calm but then element, pit and ryu were shaking like a leaf*

element: whoa this power its unreal!!

ryu: i know he became over 100,000,000 times stronger

pit: incredible

*alex scans pensukes power level but the scanner overloaded and shorted out*

alex: dam his energy levels are off the scale

nanaka: oh cmon he cant be that strong what was his normal super levels energy level??

alex: 895,000,000

*nanaka,element and pits jaws dropped*

element: what!! whats triple my power!!!

pit: so what was the reading before it shorted out??

alex: it was 986,975,873,529 before it shorted out

*nanaka, pit and elements eyes grew wide as dinner plates*

ryu: and did you get nanakas energy level??

alex: yes she was 800,201,038

element: lets agree to never piss him off if we want to live

pit,ryu,alex: agreed

pit: guess we got a chance to win this

pensuka: you have no idea and im not warmmed up yet

nanaka: uh-oh

Reply pensuka, May 21st, 2011, 3:34 pm

the battle continues and ace up sleeve *nanaka keeps trying to hit pensuka but pensuka dodges with ease*

ryu:wow this battles one sided

element: i dont know if i should be either glad nanaka is losing, be envious of he is more powerful then me or scared of having to face him later

pit: maybe if you call off you fight with him you might make it out alive

alex: still this battle is intent

ryu: what about the ninjas??

alex: i have some robots tending their injurys

pensuka: time for my new secert weapons

*pensuka makes 1000 hand signs in seconds*

pensuka: light style: divine prison of justice jutsu!!

*pensuka throws a white sphere to nanaka which she looked like she was about to block it bit split into tons of prison bar sized beams and set around nanaka as if she was in a floating cage*

nanaka: what the heck is this!?!

pensuka: a jutsu of my own creation it creates a powerful prison which not even wolverien's claws can even scratch it

element: wow didnt see that coming

nanaka: let me out!!!

pensuka: no you listern here you no good brat

nanaka: what?

ryu: whoa pensuka seems abit pissed

alex: yeah

pensuka: im sick of what you been doing stealing some girls boy just for your enjoyment, when someone managed to dance with the boy you descided to ask help with the mafia and now this trying to ruin a date for revenge!!!!!

*pensukas aura tripled in size making nanaka tremble in fear and making pit wet himself*

element: dam he is pissed off even though pit pissed his pants

pit: hey!!!!

pensuka: listern if i see you cause any more trouble agian

*pensuka pulls out a photo to nanaka which she bugged eyed in shock*

nanaka: when did you take this!!!!

Pensuka: i have my resources

element: what were you saying

pensuka: i have afew photos that invole her embaressing moments of her life and her deep dark secert that not even her father knows

nanaka: please dont show these please!!!

pit: wow shes already begging

*element takes a photo of this*

element: i wanted to remenber this the great powerful nanaka begging for mercy of not having those photos out

ryu: wow who knew that pensuka had this planned out

alex: yeah i always hear he has contacts for information and other stuff and they are 100% pure facts and are always triple checked but i though they were rumors

element: we should definitly NEVER should piss him off

pit,ryu and alex: agreed

Reply Element840 (Guest), May 21st, 2011, 3:50 pm

Chotto matte! (wait a moment!) (whoa there mr. pensuka.....hold up a super sec k? i respect how your trying to show off that power here, but try and make it resonabile man! no offense...but the way your presenting you char here.....too overpowered, i was hopin that you and my char would have a fight, your ideas for attacks and what not, against my ideas for attacks and what not. but dude....too overpowered, might wanna tone it down a smidge there, sry for any disrespect but still. and besides...this weird story thing aint even at the final chapter yet, who knows what those wacky authors have in store? i mean seriously dude, lighten up a smidge k?)

Reply pensuka, May 21st, 2011, 4:05 pm

(to element)

(just be glad on afew things i mean it was either that or force you to makeout with nanaka or fire a body swap gun at you and nanaka and also be glad i set that your powerlevel is over 2 million and also be glad i didnt plan to use a attack that would blow the god dam planet up!!!!!! it was either that or those)

Reply Element840 (Guest), May 21st, 2011, 4:47 pm

(okay, okay, sure fine. have it your way. but still think about all the awesome animes out there, tell me one character that seems overpowered. if you cant find it, good! cuse i dont there is a character out there that seems overpowered, but even if they seem overpowered at the time, take Enel, tat lighting devil fruit guy, from one piece for example: did this guy seem overpowered, yes. did he seem like a god to some other characters? yes. is he invincible? NO, luffy kicked his butt like you wouldn't believe. so okay sure im glad that you didnt do any of that stuff you said you wouldda done, but still. im just saying that your character sounds overpowered, thats all im sayin, sry for trying to ask ya to change, no lets see if we cant make a good fight scene when a more interesting chapter comes out. think about it, you vs me, pit and dolly vs nanaka, your men vs my men, and as for alex and ryu...ive got some interesting characters in mind...and one more thing.....i made em up myself, some of em may be from plants that are from popular animes, one piece, naruto, etc, but there totally my own, and sry about complainin to ya, sry but one more trying to write all this with little to NO misunderstandings at all, k? thanks fer readin this if ya did, now lets see what interesting ideas you got!)

Reply Caliv, May 21st, 2011, 4:58 pm

Noep. Not as cute as Dolly. >:(

Reply MrEmerik2000 (Guest), May 22nd, 2011, 5:25 pm

Weird Design She looks beautiful from Who Framed Roger Rabbit

Reply Fetch (Guest), May 25th, 2011, 12:01 pm

pensuke & element840 Mary Sue. BOTH of you.

And there is only ONE thing to do to a Mary Sue...

*rolls out a tank of DIP*

...erase them.

Reply miss_legion007 (Guest), May 25th, 2011, 2:11 pm

I told ya! Like I said, ribbon TF= bad dolly!

Reply Aidz (Guest), May 25th, 2011, 3:07 pm

Whoa, Whoa, take the RP to the forums if there is one, that's one huge ass wall o' text there

Reply Element840 (Guest), May 26th, 2011, 6:54 pm

Mary Sue? might I ask what that and DIP means? either not fully sure what t means, but dear Fetch.....this story is not fully finished yet. pls explain your comment as soon as you can. I apologize if there is anything you dont like, but wait, it will get better. And if that mary sue thing means the characters are too perfect, its only pensuka's bit, at least i think so, im not entirely sure, but if your mary sue thing includes me, then im sry, seriously i am. But, like i said, this story aint over yet. just you wait, its gonna getting interesting and more rational, or whatever you call it, later. so get rid of those complaints! this is a free chat place, i apologize if its annoying to you guys. i guess you could say its my fault, cuse i read some of pensuka's earlier rp bits of this story and decided to join in, but i dont think he likes having the spotlight being taken or whatever you call it. but think about it! doesn't this little story need some flare? otherwise its slightly dull (only slightly!). im very sry....but i guess you could say me and pensuka are trying to make this story more interesting, either way, im very sry if its annoying. But pls understand that this is something that me and pensuka like to do, although not particularly together as you might have read through the little story bits...but still!

Reply pensuka, May 28th, 2011, 7:23 am

sshheesshh some people cant have a little fun here and by the way element i could say abit same to you after all attacking someones ninja squad so you be abit of a ally thats just someway to make you be like vegeta, shadow and sasuke combined of wanting to be best in it

Reply Alex Warlorn (Guest), May 29th, 2011, 1:15 am

So what is the name of Nanaka's alternate persona?

Reply Element840 (Guest), May 30th, 2011, 3:27 pm

some how i knew somebody, in this case pensuka, would say something like that. okay sure, fine, but that aint all of the story. just wait for the explanation ok? and besides im still learnin with this rp stuff so there are gonna be mistakes. think of it as a rough draft for a book, its not gonna be perfect. and im sry if i sound rude here, im just stating somethin. oh and one more thing, pensuka is right, cant some guys just have some fun here without being criticized?

Reply pensuka, June 7th, 2011, 2:48 pm

thank you element see it cant hurt to have a little fun i mean what harm can a little fun do???

Reply EP (Guest), June 28th, 2011, 10:29 pm

Doll Form So the ribbons turn them into dolls, but their doll form is determined by their "inner selves," then. Megumi is nice and sweet and quiet, so she becomes a pretty ball joint doll, but Nanaka is mean, so she becomes a silicone sex doll. Makes sense.

Reply Guest, May 12th, 2012, 4:44 pm

nanaka just had ruin the romance

Reply Nezumi (Guest), August 23rd, 2012, 10:00 am

Pretty, but I'd kinda like to see a doll Natsume.

Reply James Birdsong, June 14th, 2013, 10:03 am


Reply BURNOUT BRO (Guest), May 22nd, 2014, 10:37 am

I CANCELLED AN E-P-I-C ROAD RAGE... FOR THIS? nanaka: Well, what're YOU gonna do?
burnoutbro: (calls eddie valiant(from W.F.R.R.))Yello, Eddie?
Eddie: Yeah, Burnout Bro?
Burnout Bro: How much D.I.P. you got?
Nanaka: D-D-Did he say...?
Eddie: A few cans, Why?
Burnout Bro: Feel like makin' a little "D.I.P.-livery" To Playtime Comics?
Everyone except Burnout Bro: "D.I.P.-livery"????
Burnout Bro: A new word I made that consists od the words "D.I.P." & "Delivery".
Nanaka(horrified): "D.I.P."? As in that toon-killing green slime-like substance? "D.I.P." as in "W.F.R.R.-brand D.I.P."? THAT kind of "D.I.P."?
Burnout Bro: YIP-A-D.I.P, Nanaka!
Nanaka: (Insert Girlie-Girl equivalent of a "Top-Of-The-Lungs Horror Movie-Style" Scream here) NO! I DON'T WANNA GET DIPPED! YOU CAN'T MAKE ME!
Burnout Bro: Ready...
Nanaka: (winces)
Burnout Bro: Aim...
Nanaka: (braces for impact)

Reply Burnout Bro (Guest), May 22nd, 2014, 11:11 am

I CANCELLED AN E-P-I-C ROAD RAGE... FOR THIS? Pt. 2 (Continuing from my last comment)
Burnout Bro: Well Nanaka, hope you brought your dancing heels, (no matter how Girly they seem to be...(shudders)) 'Cause it's time to do the "Blue D.I.P.-nube"!
Nanaka: (groans) Another "D.I.P. word"?
Burnout Bro: WAY more where THAT came from, "Nana-cutie".
Nanaka: (blushes) Y-You're really smart.
Megumi(to Nanaka): um, Why're You blushing? (remembers that Burnout Bro called her "Nana-cutie")...Oh.
Burnout Bro: Anyhoo, now that we've got THAT outta the way, LET'S. GET. DIPPED! (to Pensuka, Ryu, Alex, & Element840): Get that Jessica Rabbit RIP-OFF in the D.I.P.!
Nanaka(Singsong Voice):I DON'T THINK SO! (Blows smooches at Burnout Bro, Pensuka, Ryu, Alex, & Element840, thus hypnotizing them)

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