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A promise is a promise

May 7th, 2011, 7:15 am

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Reply Lord T Hawkeye, May 7th, 2011, 7:18 am

Let's hope Daisuke takes it well.

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Reply pensuka, May 7th, 2011, 8:29 am

were all set pensuka: ok now that everyone is back in action best check on things now

*pensuka sees what happens*

pensuka: what the hell has she gone nuts!?!?!?

ryu: whats wrong??

pensuka: she took the ribbon off and change back in front of him

ryu: that cute little shy girl with the glasses is dolly's original form when she isnt wearing that ribbon???

pensuka: in a nut shell yes

*pensuka pulls out the walkie talky*

pensuka: all squads did you see it

ninja squad leader 1: yes sir

ninja squad leader 2: so did we

ninja squad leader 3: same here

ninja squad leader 4: we also saw it and were surprised

Pensuka: listen up that is her normal form and also you know those small blue scrolls i gived yous afew days ago

all ninja squad leaders: yes??

pensuka: unseal them now

*which they did which appered out of the scroll easch was tri prong kunais, soilder pills and a katana but each of them had a symbol for 1 of the 4 basic elements earth, wind, fire and water*

pensuka:i want your men to have the tri prong kunais and even the amount of soilder pills and since i know that each of yous are most skilled on certian jutsu elements i set akatana which can be used when you focus your element chakra now get ready quickly

all ninja squad leaders: yes sir

*pensuka puts away the walkie talkie*

ryu:let me guess you gave them those for emergancys

pensuka: yes and i got to make a phone call

*pensuka pulls out his cell phone dails a number and wait til the other end is pciked up*

???: hello??

pensuka: its me alex

alex: yo whats up?

pensuka: we got a code 39-0Z1

alex: really!?! what you need!!

pensuka: i need you and afew of your robots as support

alex: right i been wanting to test my new battle suit by the way how did you like the spartan suit i made

pensuka: it worked great now how long til you get here

alex: depends on the location

pensuka: cordinates 0-2b3-42x4

alex: be there in 15 mins max!

pensuka: good by the way ryu will be helpping us too

alex: bro is there! ill be there in 10 mins then if i kick in the after burners

pensuka: ok ill be waiting

*pensuka hangs up and puts the phone away

ryu: well??

pensuka: alex will be here in 10 mins

ryu: i little bro why you called him in i dont want him get hurt

pensuka: relax he is only going to be support unit and he has a new battle suit he wanted to try out with your brother and his robots he can give up cover fire and besides my ninja squads likes alexs training area so you dont need to worry about them being mean to him

ryu: good point

*suddenly a small flash of light appered and there stood alex in a crimson battle suit (set similair as megaman from the megaman nt warrior) with at least 2 squads of robots behind him*

pensuka: what the i though you said 10 mins

alex: turns out i remenbered about the teleporter i had built last week

bother ryu and pensuka: oh..

ryu: good to see you little bro

alex: same here bro

*pensuka pulls out the walky talkie agian*

pensuka: listern up we have alex in a new battle suit and afew of his robots also backing us up as support

all ninja squad leaders: yes sir

*pensuka puts away the walkie talkie*

Pensuka: heres hopping everything will be ok

Reply Element840 (Guest), May 8th, 2011, 8:06 pm

...............uh.....pardon me.... (pardon me but, pensuka? if i may ask.....didja see that comment i made way back? extreme apologizes if not but uh, i wanted to see if i could get in on your little add-on story bit there so i submitted a bit of my own for it but didja read it? pls do if not. your little add on partially makes this whole story thing interesting, pls reply soon, im very sry if i seem rude)

Reply pensuka, May 9th, 2011, 9:15 am

ahem.. (i did read it twice to be sure of it so i though it be good twist of a divine punishment just be glad i didnt make it 10 times for worse)

Reply Element840 (Guest), May 9th, 2011, 5:06 pm

Well I'll be..... (nice payback there..but...i will be back!)
-else where on a skyscraper in the city-

Element: ARGH! i cant believe i was so easily subdued!

???: you simply underestimated his abilities, thats all

Element: i know....*sigh* the kids strong i guess, but he aint seen the last of me!

???: shouldn't you two fight together? you do have a common enemy...

Element: you mean that blonde girl who is that mafia's bosses daughter? you bet...

???: at least meet with that pensuka fellow sometime....

Element: but he might attempt to seal me again....

???: yeesh dont worry, you got me with ya. i wont let him even lift a finger to harm ya

Element: thanks Mr....

???: right, the names Pit. you dont really need to add the Mr part

Element: alright Pit, i believe its time to go for the time being

Pit: yeah this aint the time for negotiation

Element: when the time is and that ninja guy will know how useful i can be! i'll show him and arsenal that makes even Ratchet weep with joy....for i am a weapon master in training! YOU HAVE NOT HEARD THE LAST OF ME PENSUKA!

-Pit starts to fly as i pull out a hoverboard. after getting on it, we both fly off somewhere-

Pensuka: hmmm...he got out...ah whatever, he's no threat to me....i wonder who he was talking to and what he was talking about though.....ah who cares? i gotta be ready in case something bad happens here!

Reply Alex Warlorn (Guest), May 29th, 2011, 1:14 am

Fun and game end so soon? Reminds me of a twelve episode anime almost. :-)

Reply James Birdsong, June 14th, 2013, 10:01 am

I am so happy she revealed who she is

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